Jonathan

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3 Responses to Jonathan

  1. joe says:

    I like your decsriptive words like massive.
    Could you add more time adverbs like daily.

  2. sdavis says:

    Your comparison to a beautiful bride is great imagery!
    You must read through and check for missing words though…have a look.

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