I liked the adjectives you have used like sparkling and magnificent.
Why have you used these pictures.
Ronnie, maybe use some more adjectives next time.
I agree with Mitchell, those are greater adverbs. (Mitchell, don’t forget question marks for questions) . Also really like your personification. When the wind howls outside, I can almost hear it!
Did you mean a pile of chains?
Could you use conjunctions to link sentences next time?
I liked the adjectives you have used like sparkling and magnificent.
Why have you used these pictures.
Ronnie, maybe use some more adjectives next time.
I agree with Mitchell, those are greater adverbs. (Mitchell, don’t forget question marks for questions) . Also really like your personification. When the wind howls outside, I can almost hear it!
Did you mean a pile of chains?
Could you use conjunctions to link sentences next time?