Could you read through before you blog? Sentences like ‘waiting forAs a was walking’ don’t make any sense. This is a shame because you’ve used adverbs (gently/gladly) and lovely personification (dance merrily across the snow).
You must also check your spellings. You have used their and there incorrectly when you mean ‘they are’. Can you remember what this contracts to?
Could you read through before you blog? Sentences like ‘waiting forAs a was walking’ don’t make any sense. This is a shame because you’ve used adverbs (gently/gladly) and lovely personification (dance merrily across the snow).
You must also check your spellings. You have used their and there incorrectly when you mean ‘they are’. Can you remember what this contracts to?