The writing is very good Dazi i liked the imagination you put in it!
How do you pronounce the monsters name?
The punctuation is suppose to be before the speech marks!
I loved the monsters name becaus it is creative.
Have you heard of them somewhere?
Could you check it again because part of it dosn’t make sense.
Apart from that it is great!
you spelled Crete wrong it is not Creed it is Crete
ok checking it now
Ok I’m going to check it
the picture is over the writing
The writing is very good Dazi i liked the imagination you put in it!
How do you pronounce the monsters name?
The punctuation is suppose to be before the speech marks!
I loved the monsters name becaus it is creative.
Have you heard of them somewhere?
Could you check it again because part of it dosn’t make sense.
Apart from that it is great!
dont forget spelling dazi.
Ok sorry